The three pie chart below show the total school spending in UK in three periods.

The three pie chart below show the total school spending in UK in three periods.
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The three pie charts demonstrate on which 5 aspects the UK school spent money throughout three years. The data is presented in percentages.
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there was one leading factor in all years, the remaining experienced changes in the priority of spending. By far the highest percentage was maintained by teachers’ salaries in 1981 and 1991, comprising 40%, 50% and respectively. Despite the slight fall, it made up 45% of total school spending in the year 2001.
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Furniture and equipment with the percentage going down and up from 15% to 5% and from 5% to 23%. The smallest amount was spent on insurance throughout all years but there was a steady growth in the percentage from 2 % up to 8%.
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, in the year 1981, the proportion of spending was the same
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Furniture and equipment and Resources
e.g.books
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, both at 15%.
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furniture and equipment witnessed a slump in 1991, constituting
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5%, after what suddenly took the second position at 23% in 2001. Meanwhile, the resources showed the opposite pattern, increasing
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up to 20% and going down in 2001, standing at 9 %.
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