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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the forested area in millions of
hectares
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 of different continents between 1990 and 2005.
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,
Europe
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 and Asia exhibited an escalating movement ,
while
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 other regions demonstrated a downward trend throughout the period.
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,
Europe
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 was the dominant territory in terms of the forested area in
million
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hectares
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 by far from 1990 to 2005. The main regions that saw a noticeable increase in their forested lands were
Europe
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 with 989
million
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hectares
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 and Asia with 576
million
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hectares
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 in 1990. After a decade,
Europe
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 increased its forested land by 9
million
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hectares
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 before reaching
to
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1001
million
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hectares
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 in 2005. Meanwhile, Asia experienced a slight drop of 6
million
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hectares
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 between 1990 to 2000, before rising to a peak of 584
million
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hectares
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 in 2005. The vast majority of the continents'
forest
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forests
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 amount saw a decline in the period of 15 years, which were
Africa
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, North
America
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, Australia and South
America
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. South
America
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 and
Africa
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 demonstrated a dramatic fall
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 approximately 40 to 42
million
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hectares
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 from 1990 to 2000. Since
Africa
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 finished
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2005 with just below 700
million
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hectares
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, South
Africa
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also
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 completed with below 900
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hectares
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. Oceania (199
million
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hectares
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 in 1990) and North
America
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 (708
million
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hectares
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 in 1990) only dropped by around 2-3 during the 15-year period.
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