Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

There is an assumption that

computers

are the most significant

invention

since the 20th century. I believe

this innovative devices

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this innovative device

these innovative devices

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bring many communication services and

job

opportunities into our lives, and I agree

with

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that

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their

invention

is potentially the most important one compared to others over a hundred years.

Firstly

computers

ease

people'

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people's

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lives with different conversation methods

such

as web-based forums, email services, texting applications, and social media

platforms

. These

platforms

provide brand-new and instant communication channels which are assisting our daily routines in different locations.

For instance

, lots of people around the world using Instagram, and having

an

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instant

conversation

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conversations

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with celebrities, their relatives, or colleagues, since its establishment. Telephones might be considered

as

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more appropriate for

such

interactions;

however

, smartphones and tablets are actually pocket-size

computers

.

Therefore

, the benefits of these devices only increase the importance of the

invention

of

computers

.

Secondly

,

computers

provide a range of new

job

alternatives

such

as being an influencer, a

youtuber

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YouTuber

or a computer engineer. Its

invention

not only

influence

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influences

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the

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job

opportunities, but it

also

influences the environment of working

with

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providing a remote working chance for individuals. An influencer,

for example

, can develop his own business

with

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by

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creating some content on different social media

platforms

though

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through

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the distant working model. Eventually,

this

person can earn money without doing a classic occupation or working at an office. In conclusion, some people suggest that the most important

invention

is

computers

over a hundred years, and I believe it might well be the most significant and precious

invention

due to

its new

job

opportunities and provided

platforms

.