The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts display the five aim why individuals would prefer to stay or leave Great Britain.
Overall
, quality of life is the biggest reason why people
would choose to stay or leave in the United Kingdom. The weather
and financial resources had a great difference in both charts, while
the others are relatively similar.
The biggest reason why people
wanted to leave the UK is because of the quality of life, with just above one-third of the overall
share. The next biggest cause is the weather
, with 22%, moreover
, financial resources had just 2% less than the weather
. Employment and joining family and friends had the lowest proportions, with 15% and 9% respectively.
On the other hand
, 40% of people
wanted to stay in the United Kingdom because of the quality of life. Almost one-third of individuals would stay in the country because of financial resources. Furthermore
, employment only occupied 13% of the proportion, and the reasons for joining family and friends, and weather
are the biggest losers with only 10% and 7% of people
respectively taking them as the reason of why they would stay.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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