18.The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster university. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts below display the answers
of
the Change preposition
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reason
why undergraduates and postgraduates decided to go to Vaster Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
university
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University
Overall
, reputation had the highests
market share in both degrees, continued by the cost. Correct your spelling
highest
Personal
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The personal
recommendation
also
stands out in the case of undergraduate
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undergraduates
while
the other reasons are not really significant.
In the undergraduate students
graph, 30% of individuals chose the university because of its reputation, and just under a quarter was because of the cost. The Change to a genitive case
student's
students'
thirds
biggest Fix the agreement mistake
third
overall
share is personal
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a personal
recommendation
with one-fifth of the portion, while
location
is half of Add an article
the location
personal
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the personal
recommendation
. The motives of availability of accommodation and others occupies
9% and 7% respectively.
About the questionnaire done with Change the verb form
occupy
th
postgraduate, Correct your spelling
the
reputation
of Vaster University was the main reason, with 42%. Correct article usage
the reputation
Moreover
, 36% was because of the cost. The other four reason
had only a small percentage, Change to a plural noun
reasons
which
7% Change preposition
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belonging
personal
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a personal
recommendation
, localtion
and other reasons have 6% each, and the availability of accommodation is set as the biggest loser with only 3%.Correct your spelling
location
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