Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Supermarkets
have become a necessity in society. Use synonyms
However
, the massive expansion of the stores creates debates about whether it hinders the local communities. I believe Linking Words
supermarkets
do not affect the local communities as much as people think. In Use synonyms
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essay, I would argue that small Linking Words
businesses
have their own merits that would not be overturned by Use synonyms
Supermarkets
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To begin
with, the target market for the supermarket is different. Linking Words
While
small Linking Words
businesses
usually focus on their low price, Use synonyms
supermarkets
offer something similar at higher prices. Use synonyms
Additionally
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supermarkets
would offer a different option for similar products with different ranges of tags. Use synonyms
For example
, the supermarket would usually provide organic and non-organic options of the same product at different costs. Linking Words
Therefore
, the target customer for the supermarket product would be someone with more money, time to spare to contemplate their grocery choices, and enjoyment to choose from the shelves.
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On the other hand
, local Linking Words
businesses
offer a smaller range of options, with better prices and sometimes superior products. Use synonyms
For instance
, the vegetables that are sold in the local store are fresher and organic because they are immediately picked from local farmers too. They Linking Words
also
give better prices because they sell products without going through a lot of processes and hand.
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while
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supermarkets
may affect small Use synonyms
businesses
because of their convenience, Use synonyms
however
, I believe that local Linking Words
businesses
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also
thrive because they have their own strength. Linking Words
Hence
, the community should not be discouraged and continue to improve their business so that they can have healthy competition with the big markets.Linking Words
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