Risks play a crucial role in every individual's
who wants to see growth in their respective fields and their
. Though
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few individuals believe
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might navigate them
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a more ambitious path in both
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and personal
, I do not agree that the advantages
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the disadvantage.
, it can
have a few detrimental effects
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and
essay will support
argument.
On one hand, individuals often tend to
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crucial decisions in their work environment. A particular person will take
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challenging decision of changing their job for various reasons like they are not recognised enough or not promoted enough.
, the new company will recognise them on various criteria and will ensure them with high financial stability .
to that, it will gradually increase their confidence and
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of their work.
, a friend of mine was working in
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MNC for
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salary package and as soon as realised she was not able to meet her financial needs with that money , she risked her current job and took an interview in another MNC . Fortunately, she secured the job and is now
a high pay scale with which she is capable of
her requirements without any hesitation.
, youngsters are more prone to taking
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in their personal
.
, bikes and cars are modes through which young adults showcase their driving skills risking all others travelling through the same route.
,
daring choice might bring a thrilling experience,
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always
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at the expense of others. Youngsters who drive
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a very high speed on common roads , usually end up in a
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incident, thereby, affecting other commoners.
,
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years back my aunt was
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of rash driving, where two young boys lost control of their car and ended up hitting my aunt
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, she was hospitalised for 6 months and since
she lost her walking ability.
In my conclusion,
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totally depends on the individual's perspective and why they want to do it.
, challenging decisions can be
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,
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must be taken in a way that
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does not affect a third person. If risks are combined with
and determination , one can expect the results that
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.