In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. What is the cause?What can be done to deal with this?

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day and age, it is likely that there is an emergence of juvenile delinquencies in several nations. The fundamental cause of

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problem is the lack of

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criminal education at school, yet can be resolved by adequate punishments by authorities. It should be understood that youngsters would not commit crimes if they were

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studying at schools.

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instance, are conventionally ignoring crime-related areas to lecture these students, which

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an imperative role in teenager’s mindset development.

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lack of awareness and ignorance that

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leads to

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circumstance, where children are unable to go to school because of poverty or inadequate conditions.

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, there is a severe problem with

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offenders rate, which now is known as the most serious social issue for

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nation. Practical actions,

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, can be taken by authorities to at least alleviate

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issue. The most reliable approach is to punish the young offenders directly. By putting an adequate punishment, teenagers will get a full understanding of their faults which can be seen as a lecture to adjust themselves and rehabilitate to the society later on.

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, other children, especially

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are likely to commit an

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in the future may be profoundly frightened of these retributions.

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, the proportion of youth crime will probably drop significantly which can contribute to the general advancement all over the world.

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juvenile delinquency as the most severe issue recently,

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been punishing young offenders adequately.

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, the young criminal rate

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particular nation

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seen a remarkable decrease throughout the period of 20 years

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, it is evident that youth crimes are conventionally derived from the lack of crime-related education in school years.

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, reasonable retributions which are implemented by

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can be taken into consideration to address

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problem.