You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The pie charts compare the
reasons
as to
why Change preposition
apply
tourists
chose to visit Orange city
between the years 2006 and 2016.Capitalize word
City
Overall
, in 2016, the number of tourists
visiting the city
increased by 0.9 million, when compared to 2006.
On the one hand, in 2006, almost half the tourists
(45%) visited the city
due to
the annual events
that were conducted there. In second place, museums attracted 27% of tourists
. Theater
came in third place, which was closely followed by restaurants, contributing 13% and 10% respectively. Change the spelling
Theatre
Lastly
, 5% of the tourists
visited the city
due to
other reasons
.
On the other hand
, in 2016, restaurants attracted a major crowd, followed closely by annual events
. Museums came in third place by attracting 11% of the visitors. It is a striking feature that, only one-fourth of the crowd for annual events
came to visit theaters
and came for other Change the spelling
theatres
reasons
respectively.
In conclusion, from 2006 to 2016, restaurants and other reasons
attracted more people. On the contrary
, fewer tourists
came for annual events
, theater
and museums.Change the spelling
theatre
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, tourists, city, events with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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