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The number of internet users around the world has risen from just under two billion in 2010 to over five billion today. That is a rise from around 28% of the global population being online to almost 65%. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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There is no denying the fact that
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internet
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 has made a significant
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 in
people
's lives,
while
 it is a commonly held
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 that
Internet
 users range happen to get
a
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huge increasing level in the past years, there is
also
 an argument that
eposes
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proposes
 it, in my opinion, I consider that most
people
's work has moved to an online tools to make it more easier, and because of that, companies productivity rise
as well as
 their profit.
To begin
 with, we should take
in
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 consideration that
people
 have expressed various
internet
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 solutions in order to improve their performance
in
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 work,
in other words
,
internet
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 has become an essential part
in
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 our everyday
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,
in addition
, we must face the fact that we should learn how to use
internet
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 as an expert rather than fighting it,
for example
, it is perfect if we could take a
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 about how we could be better
internet
 users.
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 to consider that
at the end
 of the
day
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 we have to use the
internet
 one way or another, it is
also
 possible to say that there is no way out of it,
for instance
,
according to
a
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social research was published in the wall street journalist on the thirty – first of October twenty hundred
an
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 nine, which entitled "
internet
 using", the research concluded that all worlds nations are going to develop a way to make their life remarkable by using the
internet
. In conclusion, despite
people
 having different views, I consider that
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 increasing use is a huge benefit to
people
's
life
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.
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