Some people believe that elderly parents ought to live at senior homes. Other believe that they should live with family members. Do you agree or disagree?
Old family
members
require special care for their physical and mental health. There is a debate about where they should reside. Use synonyms
While
a group claims that elder Linking Words
citizens
Use synonyms
shall
live with their families, Verb problem
should
the
others suggest that they should live in special "senior homes." Correct article usage
apply
Except
special cases, it is essential for senior Add the preposition
Except for
citizens
to live with their immediate family Use synonyms
members
, simply because spouses, Use synonyms
children
, and in-laws usually provide better care, and Use synonyms
also
elder person Linking Words
feels
important around them.
A relatively healthy family often gives a decent amount of love and care for their parents and grandparents, compared to senior compounds. The love between old and young Correct subject-verb agreement
feel
members
of a household builds up during the years they live together. They understand Use synonyms
eachothers
traits and can cope with one another. An extended Iranian family, Correct your spelling
each other's
for example
, usually lived together. Linking Words
Members
of the family exchange love, and in Use synonyms
this
regard, seniors live their Linking Words
last
20 or 30 years in peace and contentment.
Older Linking Words
citizens
are often healthy enough to participate in minor family actions or chores. Not only do they help with decisions and share their wisdom, but they can act as their Use synonyms
grand
Correct your spelling
grandchildren's
children
's babysitters. Take that Iranian extended family, Use synonyms
for instance
. Seniors used to look after Linking Words
children
, tell stories to them, and even do the grocery Use synonyms
shoppings
, if healthy enough. Fix the agreement mistake
shopping
This
participation, Linking Words
although
not great or financially significant, boosts their sense of importance and secures Linking Words
children
's well-being.
In conclusion, I deeply disagree with the notion of sending senior Use synonyms
citizens
to senior homes, because they are emotionally bound to their families, and they can still be beneficial and have Use synonyms
active
role in their families.Add an article
an active
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