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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.

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In modern life, many people like to use
e-
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books
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 and
depends
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 on people’s
preference
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 others are choosing physical
books
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. In my opinion, I think that reading
e-
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books
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 might bring about major drawbacks for individuals and society. Admittedly, there are some basic advantages
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 using electronic
books
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.
Firstly
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, it has numerous positive aspects for
environment
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, because
for
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preparing
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books
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do
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 not need to destroy a great number of trees. It is obvious that trees are crucial elements, which are stored carbon and stabilize soils.
Secondly
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, electronic
books
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 are flexible and affordable, the reason
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 that the users can read anywhere and anytime.
Moreover
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,
this
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 is more cost-effective
due to
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e-
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books
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 cost less money.
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, despite the upside above, I believe readers who are choosing electronic
books
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 could face serious problems.
For instance
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, the users have to stare at a screen for a long time
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 leads to essential problems with
eyes
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the eyes
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. In modern society, various professors and doctors inform people about how dangerous to carry electronic devices together and many of them consider that through reading paper
books
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 all new information will
be remember
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 for
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while
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 in mind.
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, not all areas have access to the internet, which is the key point for downloading electronic
books
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. Even though every person should carry with
themselves
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them
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 at least one physical book. It is obvious that for many humans original
books
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 give unusual feelings when turning pages.
To sum up
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, using
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books
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have
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 own pros and cons sides, but I suggest that
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 are greatly compared to
benefits
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the benefits
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.
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