You are working for an international company and you would like to request time off for a family event. Write a letter to your boss Explaining what the celebration is Asking for the time off Explaining how you can get work done when you take time off
Dear Mr.Ali,
I am writing
this
letter to request to
you Change preposition
that
about
approve 3 days off from work which is going to be held next week Change preposition
apply
begin
on the 13 of October Wrong verb form
beginning
due to
a family function .
My older brother got married he will stay in the homtown
during Correct your spelling
home town
wedding
days after that he will leave Correct article usage
the wedding
to
United Change preposition
for
State
to complete his education with his wife as I am part of Fix the agreement mistake
States
family
member my duties Correct article usage
the family
to
help Add a missing verb
are to
older
sister and mother with regard to wedding arrangements .
Correct pronoun usage
my older
Moreover
, As I mentioned in this
letter my brother wants to get bachelor’s
degree in Correct article usage
a bachelor’s
United
Correct article usage
the United
state
I am not able to see himFix the agreement mistake
States
a
Change preposition
for a
while
therefore
, I want to stay with him during that time.
Regarding my duties I am going to carry my labtob also
I have access in
the system I will take care Change preposition
to
about
my Change preposition
of
responsibility
during that time Fix the agreement mistake
responsibilities
also
I will contact to
you.
Kind regards ,Change preposition
apply
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task achievement
Clearly state the purpose of the letter and provide necessary details about the celebration.
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Use appropriate and professional language throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize the content of the letter in a more coherent and cohesive manner.
coherence cohesion
Use a formal greeting and closing in the letter.
task achievement
Clearly express how you plan to handle your responsibilities while taking time off.
lexical resource
Improve your use of vocabulary and sentence structures.
grammatical range and accuracy
Pay attention to grammar and sentence structure.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite