Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.

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that we can predict a
person
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culture
and character from their choice of clothing can reveal a lot about their
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background and character. I do completely
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this
view.
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type of clothing
someone
wear
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can provide insight into their cultural
backgrounds
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. Every
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tradition and beliefs
for instance
in
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women wear
frok
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frock
from
,salwar kameez and lehengas and the men wear dhoti kurta , salwar kameez ,sherwani and suit on
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occasion and in western countries, people usually wear suit , shirt and trousers.
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by observing
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clothing
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we can their cultural
backgrounds
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. There are a
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clothes can
also
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someone
dresses can show their level of confidence and creativity
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a person dresses professionally in
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bright colourful clothes
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creative
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and
personality
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some
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. I believe that an individual choice of clothing can tell a lot about their
culture
and
personality
. Clothing can reveal
someone
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cultural
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beliefs and values
as well as
their
personality
traits
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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