The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart below illustrates the billion dollars of a nation’s exports in five different product categories in 2015 and 2016. What’s more, there is a table that exhibits the accurate

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change in each category of exports compared with the value in 2016 and 2015.

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, it is apparent that from 2015 to 2016, “gems and jewellery” was the only one that witnessed a decline, the export earnings of other categories all rose,

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textiles increased the largest

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. The top two exports, which were petroleum products and engineered goods, had similar sales volumes. In the given two years, petroleum products increased slightly by 3% from about 60 to 62 billion dollars. Engineered goods increased by a larger

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of eight and a half per cent, from roughly 58 to just over 60 billion dollars of export earnings. The other three categories had much lower export values. There was even a five per cent decrease in Gems and jewellery. Agricultural products witnessed a close similarity in those two years, increasing by approximately one per cent.

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, the earnings in textiles ascended by the highest

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, with 15.24%.

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export categories
percentage change
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GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
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