Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this probleSm?
Engaging in
a
physical activity on Remove the article
apply
day-to-day
basis is a debatable topic worldwide Add an article
a day-to-day
in
the present Change preposition
at
time
. The increased work tension contribute
to the lack of Correct subject-verb agreement
contributes
time
to spend on physical exercise . Decreased workload might enable individuals to spend some time
on their health
.The discussion of this
issue will be highlighted in this
write-up.
In this
modern era, there is increased
workload and companies require a lot from their employees . Correct article usage
an increased
As a result
, individuals spend a lot of time
in
getting the designated tasks done and they Change preposition
apply
tend
eat unhealthy foods to get through their stress . Add the particle
tend to
Therefore
, stress eating and workers being stable in one place for a long period of time
, uplifts various health
problems. For instance
, employees working in IT companies,tend to sit in one place for a long period of time
and eat calorie dense
processed foods like chips will lead to various Add a hyphen
calorie-dense
health
problems causing back pain and stomach related
issues like ulcers.
Add a hyphen
stomach-related
Following
this
, it totally depends upon the individual's perspective and how they want to live their life either in an unhealthy or healthy way. Exercising and engaging in some kind of physical exercise is imperative in order to have a healthy lifestyle. However
, people must learn how to manage their work schedule and allocate some time
for exercising or going to the gym . This
will not only improve them physically but will also
help them to destress from their work and have a healthy mindset. For instance
, many youngsters nowadays have an
habit of waking up early in the morning and Change the article
a
visit
the gym to Wrong verb form
visiting
do
Unnecessary verb
apply
enagage
in cardio and weightlifting sessions to feel energised for the day and to stay away from any Correct your spelling
engage
health related
issues.
In my conclusion, being active is conventional for a healthy lifestyle. Add a hyphen
health-related
Individual's
must be conscious Change the noun form
Individuals
Individual
on
what they eat, how they eat and what they do to be more physically active . In Change preposition
of
this
day and age , fitness plays a crucial role in alleviating various health
issues . Following
this
, people also
must be aware of the detrimental effecta
of leading an unhealthy lifestyle.Correct your spelling
effects
effect
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