Some people do not like changes and prefer to do things they are good at, while other people like taking risks and trying new things. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's world half of the human civilization do not want changes in their life and prefer to work at the same
things
, while
other people
are risk taker
and choose to try new Correct your spelling
risk-takers
things
. In my point of view, I believe it is better to take the risk
as many as possible to enhance our career-life
in the future. Correct your spelling
career
Hence
, both sides will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
First,
50% of the population in the world still prefers to work in their comfort zone , especially baby boomers. It is because today's employees are required to excel technology
regardless of their age and they are afraid to face the challenges and choose to avoid changes. Change preposition
in technology
However
, I believe if we are stuck in one task for several years, there will be no improvements in our skills and knowledge. For instance
, nearly half of the baby boomers in state-owned digital telecommunications in Indonesia preferred to do the same job over the years. One of the reasons is that they were not competent to work with technology and avoid overload tasks. As a result
, they were placed in the same position and band level.
Second,
people
who like taking risk
have a higher chance of Fix the agreement mistake
risks
get
promoted in one company. They thrive to learn and try new Change the verb form
getting
things
which they've never done before. For example
, youngsters in start up
have a faster career movement than the elderly. It is because they are Add a hyphen
start-up
risk
-takers who are always eager to develop their knowledge, practice skills, and so on.
To conclude
, while
many people
have their own opinions, considering the best methods to boost their career in companies, I believe that the key is how big the societies are able to take the risk
. If people
want a good career ahead, they need to excel many
Change preposition
in many
things
especially
technology.Add the comma(s)
, especially
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