You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear Mr. Najafi I am Mr.

zare

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Zare

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who lives in your rental apartment. In

fact

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fact,

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my family and I have lived there for 5 years. Our apartment number is 12

in

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on

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first

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the first

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floor of Oak apartment on Alavi

street

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Street

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which

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whose

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postcode is NY457 Actually, I am writing

this

letter

becouse

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because

we have a majority of problems with some furniture,

such

as

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the refrigarator

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refrigarator

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refrigerator

refrigerators

, stove and air

condition

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conditioning

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system. At

first,

the stove has lost two fire

place

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places

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since

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for

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3 months.

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, the door of

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the refrigrator

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refrigrator

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refrigerator

refrigerators

do

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does

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not close correctly and needs to keep

close

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closed

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with pressure.

Finaly

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Finally

, and the main reason that I

am

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decided to

writing

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write

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for

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to

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you about

air

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the air

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conditioner, trully it works with a loud harmful sound and

also

got

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apply

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water the

buildings

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building's

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roof and probably damade

celling

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ceiling

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. so our

neighbers

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neighbours

reported to the police and the police accepted their

fauilt

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fault

and just will have one week rest to second

awarness

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awareness

to fix it.

In

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As

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result

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a result

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, we would need enough money to solve its problem. If we do not

any

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apply

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act for the police sign, not only have to give payment, but

also

maybe the council will order

to

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us to

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close our home. Your

Sincerly

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Sincerely

, Mr. Zare