In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
It is said that in some nations, students after ending high school will take a gap year for travelling or
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may stop studying and think that Use synonyms
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The main advantage is that individuals can get Use synonyms
work
experience. Doing a job will help Use synonyms
people
to know if they really like it, and if they want to do that job in the future. As well, Use synonyms
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allows that in the future, when changing to another company, to have priority since they have had Linking Words
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Furthermore
, travelling, allows Linking Words
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to understand and know more cultures and Use synonyms
people
so they are more open-minded. After visiting different countries, there may be a place that they really like, and want to live there in the future, Use synonyms
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will make students have motivation when studying at the Linking Words
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since they have a goal. Recent research concluded that in Spain, the Use synonyms
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who have visited more countries are happier and more open to accepting new things, and Use synonyms
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have good Linking Words
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, if too many trips are made, Linking Words
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don’t have the mood to study, the only thing that they would like to do is to go to other places, and going to the Use synonyms
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as a consequence
, they will dislike Linking Words
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. The great disadvantage of working in the gap year is that some Use synonyms
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will leave their studies. Use synonyms
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is because they think that after 12 years of school, working is something new for them, they experienced new things and are not willing to go back to study, since they think that they are fine with the life they have. Studies done in the USA show that 80% of Linking Words
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that quit studying after high school, do not continue their studies.
In conclusion, taking a sabbatical year will allow individuals to try different types of Use synonyms
work
, looking for the one they like and they can learn new things. Use synonyms
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, there is a possibility that they will not study again and will not take Linking Words
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