31.Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?

It is claimed that citizens do not
visit
local
musems
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museums
nor
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or
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historical
sites
,
instead
, mainly
people
from
others
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other
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countries will go to these
places
.
This
essay will argue that
this
is because of the different interests and
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out some activities
can
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that can
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attract local individuals. The main factor is the different motivations between tourists and local
people
. Travellers,
their
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'
aim is to
visit
the countries and go to the most popular
places
, feel and watch the culture of those
places
,
learn
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and learn
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something new and
that is
why tourists will
visit
musuems
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museums
and historical
sites
, since they can get a lot of information in these locations.
While
the local
people
normally have knowledge about what can be seen, they have learned about it at school and have had personal experiences, so they would think that they don’t need to go to those
places
.
For example
, there are a lot of museums and
historial
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historical
sites
in all European countries, where normally, only travellers will go to watch it, since they will only see it once in their life. A way to encourage natives to historical locations could be
adding
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by adding
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activities.
This
can be exhibitions, cultural events or new products,
this
will help
people
to be interested in things that they have not seen before. Another way could be by reducing prices or free
tikcets
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tickets
provided in local newspapers and
maganizes
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magazines
organizes
.
This
is because since there are promotions,
people
are willing to go whenever they have time.
For instance
, in Spain, Madrid there are several museums that are free for all
people
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at
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a given time of the day, producing large queues of
people
. In conclusion, tourists go more to historical
places
of
other country
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another country
other countries
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because
that is
their aim; to experience and
visit
new regions,
while
local individuals already have knowledge about them.
However
, museums and historical
sites
could attract residents by adding original ideas and making promotions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural heritage
  • tourist attractions
  • interactive exhibits
  • perception
  • civic pride
  • engagement
  • community outreach
  • curate
  • cultural institutions
  • historical significance
  • sustainable tourism
  • resident benefits
  • local patronage
  • preserve
  • educational initiatives
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