32.Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people have little to gain from the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that travelling by air is only advantageous for wealthy individuals and not for normal

people

.

This

essay disagrees with

this

statement because there are cheap tickets and it increases employment.

Firstly

, there are a lot of airlines in

all

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the world at different prices. The price varied a lot depending on the dates, airline, when

people

buy it and the distance. Since the economy and the average wage of each country

is

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are

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different, the prices of the

flights

will

also

change, that

its

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is

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why all

flights

have different price tickets, so that everyone can afford it. It is true that

in

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dates

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the dates

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of summer and

Christmas

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it might be more expensive, but if

people

can buy it earlier, it will be cheaper.

For example

, the price of

flights

from Spain to any European

countries

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country

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varied

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varies

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between 60€ to 400€, which almost all Spanish citizens are able to pay for. In some

nations

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it is difficult to find jobs because of the scarcity of

works

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work

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or

it

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because it

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is too competitive, so air travel can allow

people

to go to other countries and find job opportunities.

Also

,

they

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there

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might be some individuals that want to find their dream lifestyles, and

this

only can be fulfilled in other countries, some places are too far away that it is impossible to go by train or boat,

then

aeroplanes are the best option.

For instance

, a lot of South

America

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American

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individuals look for job offers outside their nation,

such

as

the

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in the

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United States and Spain, since these places can speak Spanish,

as

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they do not have problems with language, so it is easier for them to find a job. In conclusion, there are cheap

flights

that almost everyone can afford and

also

, the

possibily

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possibility

of traveling by plane

allow

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allows

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people

to have

a

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work, I

therefore

, believe that air travel

benefit

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benefits

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both rich and

middle class

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middle-class

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people

.