Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Introduction Some would argue that homeschooling has more

advantages

than sending a

child

to

school

. I believe both have

advantages

and disadvantages to both methods of schooling.

Firstly

, many

parents

decide to send their

children

to public schools for a multitude of

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. These can include economics

as well as

an understanding that when

children

attend

school

it helps them to develop social skills and

also

teaches them how to interact with other people which will be necessary for their future. Sending

children

to

school

also

provides an advantage to the

parents

as it enables the

parents

to engage in employment which helps them to support their families and generate income. The downside to sending kids to

school

can include the

parents

not having as much time to spend with their

child

to build

the

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maternal and paternal relationships.

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a lot of schools are

over enrolled

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which can detract from the

child

's education if they require extra assistance as teachers are overworked. On the other side of the

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some

parents

choose to

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school

their

children

. The benefits of

this

enable the

parents

to take a more active role in the

child

's life and the

parents

are around for the major milestones and developments that

children

go through. The disadvantages sometimes outweigh the

advantages

in

this

method as sometimes the

children

are not learning to a set curriculum

that is

required by educational authorities.

Furthermore

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homeschooling

children

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can impede their social development as they

dont

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don't

have the ability to learn social skills like

children

who attend a physical

school

.

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the

parents

are at home more which means reduced income from employment To summarise both methods of education have

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advantages

and application and their disadvantages.

This

choice comes purely from a personal perspective and families need to evaluate which mode of education would best suit their unique family dynamic