The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the career path distribution of graduates with an Anthropology bachelor's degree in percentage.
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table below indicates the salary statistics of those after five years of working experience as freelancers, in the government sector and in private companies.
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, the majority of the graduates go straight into full-time work
after graduation and the least portion of them choose to pursue a postgraduate degree while
working part-time simultaneously. Moreover
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the same portion of them earns just slightly less than a hundred thousand dollars a year.Submitted by katehihi25 on
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