The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the career path distribution of graduates with an Anthropology bachelor's degree in percentage.
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table below indicates the salary statistics of those after five years of working experience as freelancers, in the government sector and in private companies.
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, the majority of the graduates go straight into full-time
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after graduation and the least portion of them choose to pursue a postgraduate degree
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working part-time simultaneously.
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, the table shows that anthropologists working in the government sector are the best paid in the three employment categories, with half reaching above a hundred thousand dollars a year. With slightly more than half of the graduates embarking on full-time
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, there is 15
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of them
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part-time.
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, the number of people unemployed is slightly less, which accounts for 12
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.
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, about half of anthropologists working in the government sector earn above a hundred thousand dollars yearly,
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there is merely 30
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of those who
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for a private company do the same.
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, 40
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of freelance consultants obtain the same salary,
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the same portion of them earns just slightly less than a hundred thousand dollars a year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words work, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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