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Addiction to the internet is a wide spread problem. What problems does this cause ? What is a suitable solution ?

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In
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recent
 years, teenagers
adicting
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addicting
 to the
internet
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among
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the
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 prevalent issue around the world.
This
 problem is able to lead to
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low efficiency in work and study
,
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 and
lack
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 of
experiences
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 in a wide variety of aspects of life, yet it can be addressed by organizing more public events. One of the primary
consequence
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 of the addiction to the
internet
 is a plummet in the efficiency of work and study. To be more specific, the residents, particularly teenagers, who
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addict
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 to the use of
internet
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 are more likely to be distracted by the wide range of interesting things on the
internet
,
such
 as news about well-known actors.
As a result
, they are not capable of staying
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 on working or studying, thereby resulting in
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low efficiency. Take
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 people as
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 instance, they have
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a tendancy
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tendancy
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tendency
 to spend a lot of time
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studying or working and stay
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 late
due to
 the distraction of the
internet
. Another dominant effect of
this
 problem is the lack of
experiences
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 in a multitude of aspects of the world. Put
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simply, The citizens who always
ultilize
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utilise
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smartphones or computers towards suffering
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 or playing games tend to stay at home for a long time.
Therefore
, they would get access to an abundance of public activities or do not have the capability to go
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 several feelings or knowledge about the
worlds
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, resulting in making them more passive.
Nevertheless
, The viable measure to
this
 problem is the organisation of more events or activities for dwellers. To explain
further
, the government had better invest
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the
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wide-ranging activities which
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 extremely attractive to the vast majority of youths.
Thus
, the youngsters do not pay attention to the
internet
 and they are able to participate in these events. In conclusion,
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addiction to the
internet
 could lead to
the
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distraction of teenagers and
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unadequate
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inadequate
 experiences
of
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the
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life.
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