In today's fast paced wprlf, many individual struggle with delaying tasks. Discuss a cause of this and suggest an effective sokution to overcome it.

In
nowdays
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today's
life, many
people
have
procrastination
habits and it
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a lot to their
career
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. The root cause of
this
is having
problem
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with
time
management, yet it can solved by
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organising
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and
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breaking
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the
task
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tasks
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smaller. The current cause of
procrastination
is poor
time
manangement
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management
skill
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skills
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. It must
me
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be
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recognized that, when
people
face
to
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the
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big and difficult tasks, they do not how
to begin
and feel haunted.
This
is because
,
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people
do not arrange their
schedule
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schedules
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scientifically and inevitably they leave
eveything
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everything
to the
last
possible moment.
Consequently
,
procrastination
affect
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to
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people
not only
mental
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their mental
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health but
also
physical
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their physical
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health,
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making
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them feel
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, low –
self confident
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and even
have
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sick . Take a university in America as an example, when student
procrastinate
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procrastinates
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with their study and do not have
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a plan
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plan
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plans
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, they
consistenly
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consistently
rated
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the idea of studying as very stressful,
make
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making
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it difficult to
started
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.
However
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the problem can solved by organizing an effective
schedule
. The most effective approach is breaking the task smaller and
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dividing
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time
appropriately.
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,
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the schedule
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schedule
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the schedule
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need
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to have
breaktime
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break time
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for every task because
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a short
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short
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break can help
people
unwind and
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recharge
their mind after hard work
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and also
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also
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and also
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reduce
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stress.
This
is true in many famous
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, students have
plan
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plans
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and
reminder
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reminders
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to study throughout the day,
while
they
were
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are
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studying, most reported that it was not so bad and most
student
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students
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who have clear
schedule
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schedules
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are successful in their
study
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studies
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.
Thus
it can be seen that the principal reason for
procrastination
is struggling with poor
time
management skills.
Nevertheless
,
build
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building
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up a scientific
schedual
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schedule
can help prevent
procrastination
problem
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problems
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.
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