In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

It is broadly believed that

university

education ought to

provides

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free of charge tuition for everyone.

Although

I support

this

view, somehow, I assume that

this

could be

pletorah

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a

problems

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if each

university

apply

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this

impractical view

due to

the

government

should take the burden.

Therefore

, there should be

a criteria

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for those who could get

this

benefit and the reasons will be elaborated on

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in this

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this

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following essay. On the one hand, in line with inflation, the fees in order to be in

the

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a

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university

is

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are

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getting higher and more expensive and, unfortunately, not all students

could

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afford it.

Moreover

, the

government

should provide a scholarship or tuition help for some disciples.

Indonesia

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Indonesian

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Government

,

for instance

,

who

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apply

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provide massive scholarship only for

superb

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candidate for

Indonesian

. They help

Indonesian

people in order to be able

learning in

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to learn

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abroad

university

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at university

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.

As a consequence

, many

Indonesian

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Indonesians

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could afford

undergraduate

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an undergraduate

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degree or higher.

On the other hand

, if the

policy maker

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policymakers

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provide massive scholarship

profoundly

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apply

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, it would impact on

economics

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economic

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problem in Indonesia.

Therefore

,

Indonesian

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the Indonesian

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Government

do a schematic instrument or criteria to obtain

briliant

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brilliant

candidates. As an illustration, people who

has

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experience in social is more preferable

for

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to

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the policy maker

instead

of the people who only get

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a 3,9

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3,9

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3.9

GPA but

doing

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nothing

on

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to

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the

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apply

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society. By way of conclusion, I am still convinced that

government

presence is the key to

provide

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providing

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some pupils in order to have a seat in

university

.

Nonetheless

, they

also

have to select the candidates so the

choosen

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chosen

one

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are

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fulfil the minimum requirements.