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addiction to the internet is a widespread problems. what problems does this causes? what is a suitable solution

#addiction #internet
A worrisome trend has emerged with
regards
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 to
people
 who are addicted to the
internet
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Internet
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.
This
 issue leads to
the
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increased
obesity
 and mental
health
problems
become
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worsening. A useful solution should be prioritised is addicts should
be
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cut back on the amount of
using
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social media and replace
by
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having some
hobbies
such
 as reading
books
,
hanging
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and hanging
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 out with
friends
. First and foremost, a consequence
should
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 be concerned about is the rate of
obesity
 increasing.
This
 is because
,
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people
 spend time on using the
internet
 too much and do not have any time and plans to eat healthily and balance
the
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their
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 lifestyle.
As a result
,
obesity
 adversely affects the life expectancy and habits of diet,
For example
, in the USA, the proportion of teenagers being overweight is approximately 40%.
Thus
, that is an alarming number of mankind's physical
health
. Another repercussion should be acknowledged that mental
health
problems
due to
 obsession with the
internet
 become more worsening.
This
 is
due to
 the fact that whilst using online with a
smart phone
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smartphone
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 or laptop,
people
 just chat with
friends
 or acquaintances via a screen without any talking or communication with other
people
.
As a result
, addicts tend to live in their own world,
hesitate
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and hesitate
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 to speak out loud and some mental
health
problems
such
 as stress,
depression
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and depression
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 appear and have a detrimental effect on them.
For example
, a study has shown that 60% of
people
 have some mental
health
problems
due to
 overusing the
internet
.
However
, a step
can
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that can
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 be taken to mitigate
this
 problem is the addict's attempt to replace that bad habit with other positive
hobbies
such
 as reading
books
,
hanging
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and hanging
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 out with
friends
. With
this
 approach, addicts can be more healthy and may have a
balance
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balanced
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 routine and lifestyle.
This
 is because
,
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apply
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these
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apply
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hobbies
 like reading
books
listening
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and listening
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 to music are positive,
have
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and have
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 an optimistic way
to shape
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of shaping
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 their life.
For instance
, many
people
 try to get rid of the addiction and
then
havea
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have a
have
 healthy life. In conclusion,
obesity
 and mental
health
problems
 are both
the
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apply
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concerning consequences, yet
it
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they
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 can be tackled by replacing the bad
habit
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habits
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by
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apply
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doing other
hobbies
such
 as reading
books
,
hanging
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and hanging
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 out with
friends
.
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