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The pictures illustrate the stages of recycling wasted
glass
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bottles
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.
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, there are 3 stages of how the wasted
glass
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bottles
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are recycled. Only 3 colors of
glass
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bottles
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are recycled: clear, green and brown. The process requires a
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amount of water, heat and fuel.
First,
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the wasted
glass
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and
bottles
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are left at the collection point to be transported to the
glass
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factory. Lorries are needed at
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stage.
Next,
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only clear, green, and brown glasses and
bottles
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are applicable for the process in which they are cleaned
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high-pressure water. After that, they will be broken into small pieces at the factory before putting them into a furnace under the temperature of 600 to 800 degrees.
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, the molten liquid
glass
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is moulded into any
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.
Finally
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, the
bottles
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are filled with the product before being distributed to the supermarket and ready for sale.
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