The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

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The pictures illustrate the stages of recycling wasted

glass

bottles

Overall

, there are 3 stages of how the wasted

glass

bottles

are recycled. Only 3 colors of

glass

bottles

are recycled: clear, green and brown. The process requires a

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amount of water, heat and fuel.

First,

the wasted

glass

and

bottles

are left at the collection point to be transported to the

glass

factory. Lorries are needed at

this

stage.

Next,

only clear, green, and brown glasses and

bottles

are applicable for the process in which they are cleaned

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high-pressure water. After that, they will be broken into small pieces at the factory before putting them into a furnace under the temperature of 600 to 800 degrees.

Then

, the molten liquid

glass

is moulded into any

shapes

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Finally

, the

bottles

are filled with the product before being distributed to the supermarket and ready for sale.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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The pictures below show the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

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Task 1 The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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