THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
The bar chart illustrates how people's consumption of
coffee
and tea and their habits to drink differ in 5 cities in Australia
according to
a survey.
It is clear that
going to a cafe for drinks contributed to a significant contribution rather than other habits in all cities, except Adelaide and buying fresh caffeine within 4 weeks was the lowest part of the
overall
percentage.
Firstly
, in Sydney and Melbourne, people bought
coffee
kinds in fresh and instant forms roughly in similar amounts around 40-50% and the visits to a cafe experienced 60 % and above 60% respectively.
Likewise
, consumers in Hobart showed a similar proportion for 3 categories as well, where purchases dropped to under 40% for fresh types of drinks and about 55% for soluble ones.
By contrast
, the consumers of instant
coffee
resulted
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increased
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in
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by
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50% within 4 weeks in Adelaide,
while
going to a cafe decreased dramatically accounting for about 40%.
Moreover
, fresh
coffee
consumption resulted in the nearly same result accounting for above 30% as in Brisban.
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