THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.
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The bar chart illustrates how people's consumption of
coffee
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and tea and their habits to drink differ in 5 cities in Australia
according to
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a survey.
It is clear that
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going to a cafe for drinks contributed to a significant contribution rather than other habits in all cities, except Adelaide and buying fresh caffeine within 4 weeks was the lowest part of the
overall
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percentage.
Firstly
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, in Sydney and Melbourne, people bought
coffee
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kinds in fresh and instant forms roughly in similar amounts around 40-50% and the visits to a cafe experienced 60 % and above 60% respectively.
Likewise
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, consumers in Hobart showed a similar proportion for 3 categories as well, where purchases dropped to under 40% for fresh types of drinks and about 55% for soluble ones.
By contrast
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, the consumers of instant
coffee
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resulted
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increased
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in
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by
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50% within 4 weeks in Adelaide,
while
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going to a cafe decreased dramatically accounting for about 40%.
Moreover
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, fresh
coffee
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consumption resulted in the nearly same result accounting for above 30% as in Brisban.
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