THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

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The bar chart illustrates how people's consumption of

coffee

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and tea and their habits to drink differ in 5 cities in Australia

according to

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a survey.

It is clear that

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going to a cafe for drinks contributed to a significant contribution rather than other habits in all cities, except Adelaide and buying fresh caffeine within 4 weeks was the lowest part of the

overall

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percentage.

Firstly

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, in Sydney and Melbourne, people bought

coffee

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kinds in fresh and instant forms roughly in similar amounts around 40-50% and the visits to a cafe experienced 60 % and above 60% respectively.

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, consumers in Hobart showed a similar proportion for 3 categories as well, where purchases dropped to under 40% for fresh types of drinks and about 55% for soluble ones.

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, the consumers of instant

coffee

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resulted

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increased

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50% within 4 weeks in Adelaide,

while

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going to a cafe decreased dramatically accounting for about 40%.

Moreover

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, fresh

coffee

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consumption resulted in the nearly same result accounting for above 30% as in Brisban.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

171 words

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THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE RESULT OF A SURVEY ABOUT PEOPLE'S COFFEE AND TEA BUYING AND DRINKING HABITS IN FIVE AUSTRAKIAN CITIES.

It is Crucial for Everyone, Especially Youth, to Save Money for the Future

Today more and more people want things instantly. Why is this? Is it positive or negative development.

In many parts of the world, some famous people are considered ‘role models’, and they are having an increasing influence on the young. Is this a positive or negative development?