Many people today find that the cost of attaining university level education is extremely high for student and their family, what are the cause of this situation and how can governments, Universities and the student themselves overcome the problem?

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time
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, more and more adolescents desire to study at
university
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,
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however
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due to
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cost
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the cost
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of studying
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living, people suffer from them. The cause of
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to be focused on two or three
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, and a number of solutions,
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appear to be possible. Arguably, there could be reasons why
price
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of
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university
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the university
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is increasing.
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, owing to obtaining tax from them by government,
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, in the UK, the state consistently
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levy from pupils
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university
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have got to
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cost
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the cost
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of studying for
students
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.
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pattern appears to be global, with the consequence that
students
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or their families need to meet the costs directly. Another cause is the increasing of
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living in the urban city, meaning that the
cost
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of
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life (
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fees
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) can be almost overwhelming for
students
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. Eventually,
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is finding
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part-time
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work
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student
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the student
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is studying.
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work tends to
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paid
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while
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taking up time
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that
students
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should merely utilize for their
study
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. Turning to
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solution, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding
courses
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.
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public budgets are under pressure these days, if we took
this
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step it would greatly ameliorate access to
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for people
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lower
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. A second remedy might be for
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University
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the University
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to offer shorter
courses
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like temporary
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. If
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courses
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were available, it would reduce the issue of living expenses to some extent.
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,
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the government
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ought to create eclectic houses for
students
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in
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near their
university
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,
for instance
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, First world countries, which established
apartment
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apartments
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for pupils
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more and more individuals engage in study. In a nutshell,
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government and
individual
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individuals
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should fabricate some ways to decrease
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cost
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the cost
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of living because
main
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the main
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reason is
price
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the price
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of living.
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