People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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enjoyment are frequently discussed these days.
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some believe that
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are responsible for their
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, others criticize
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and argue that
happiness
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depends on other
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. In the following paragraphs, both sides of
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statement will be discussed. On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why joyfulness should relate to our own. The principal reason is that you shouldn't let yourself rely on
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others too much. To explain, you should control yourself to be
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people
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person
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.
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, one of the most popular
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in Buddhism is nirvana
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by keep doing
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meditation.
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,
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who can control themselves to stay in good
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health are likely to be far away from many mental
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as depression syndrome.
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, some opponents may argue that there are many
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people
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's contentment. The main reason for
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view is that
people
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are sad when they're in trouble or
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.
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, we live in
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world
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full of competition and
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expectations
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so
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may cause unhappy
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when we miss the goal.
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, students who plan to
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universities
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not pass the
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are likely to live with their unhappiness until they can recover themselves. To summarise, the two points of the argument concerning the
happiness
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factors
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. I am of the opinion that
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is depend
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on many
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that
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of our control.
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, we should have a
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before we get mental illness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Self-reliance
  • Positive psychology
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Well-being
  • Mindset
  • Personal choices
  • Environmental factors
  • Interpersonal relationships
  • Emotional resilience
  • Quality of life
  • Subjective well-being
  • External circumstances
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