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The given pictures illustrate how plastic bottles are recycled and turned into clothes.

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The given pictures demonstrate how plastic
bottles
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 are recycled and clothing is manufactured. What stands out from the pictures is that
process
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the process
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 consists of 12 stages commencing with loading plastic
bottles
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 onto garbage trucks and terminating with introducing ready clothes for sale.
The first step is
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 that plastic
bottles
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 are loaded onto garbage trucks and,they are delivered to the factories.After
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bottles
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the bottles
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 are sorted,they are cut into small pieces .
Afterthat
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After that
,
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bottles
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bottle
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 pieces are washed and
dries
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dried
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 in the sun for 10 hours.Next,bottle pieces are boiled,and
are
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apply
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poured into special containers for the straining. After yarns are created from bottle parts,they are placed on weaving machines,and threads are woven.
The next step is
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 that threads are rolled .
Finally
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,Clothes are produced from threads and they
ready
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are ready
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 for 
the
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apply
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 sale.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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