The diagram shows how chocolate is produced.
The pictures illustrate how liquid chocolate is produced. There are 10 steps in the pictures from growing cacao tree to pressing liquid chocolate.
The first step is
that the cacao tree which has ripe red pods was grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Linking Words
Then
ripe red pods with white cocoa Linking Words
beans
are harvested by farmers. After that, Use synonyms
beans
are fermented. In the following step, Use synonyms
beans
are spread in the sun to dry. Use synonyms
Next,
dried Linking Words
beans
are put in large sacks.
The second step is that sacks are transported by train or lorry, and they are taken to the factory. After the Use synonyms
beans
are roasted, Use synonyms
beans
are Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
crushed and the outer shells are removed. Rephrase
apply
Finally
, the inner part of pressed liquid chocolate is produced.Linking Words
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