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Many students how have the oppotunity to study in other countries studying abroad may bring some beneftis to some students.Do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion, studying abroad has many benefits. I strongly support
this
 idea. First of all, It is useful for their education. If they study in another country, it will be better than studying in their own country. If people get a good education, they will become well-rounded individuals in the future. Educated people can contribute to the development of their countries.
Furthermore
, they get familiar with the new culture and have opportunities to promote their own countries.
In other words
, studying abroad broadens student's horizons. For these reasons, I believe that studying in other countries provides good opportunities for them.
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