In many countries adound the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you tink this positive or negative development. Give reason for your answer and niclude any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Nowasday
, there are many people who live in Correct your spelling
Nowadays
countryside
to move to downtown leads to it decreasing Add an article
the countryside
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
pupulation
in the Correct your spelling
population
countryside
. I personally believed
that Wrong verb form
believe
this
trend is totally harmful.
One quite serious problem that can arise from leaving the countryside
to move in cities is that it somehow causes air popllution
Correct your spelling
pollution
problem
. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
In particular
, due to
dwellers more
and more are raised, Add a missing verb
being more
this
tendency may create greenhouse
effect, which is related to human Add an article
a greenhouse
heath
. As a case in point, there are many Correct your spelling
health
healthy
problems Replace the word
health
are
created Unnecessary verb
apply
with
air pollution Change preposition
by
such
as tubercrulosis and bronchitis which lead to seriously reduce
human health for a long time .Wrong verb form
reduced
Therefore
, moving out countryside
may create some problems which cause many people's lifes
.
Another issue which should be not overlooked is that moving Correct your spelling
lives
Change preposition
apply
to
downtown uncontrollably, which is more likely Change preposition
apply
Change the verb form
to make
makes
food imbalanced situation. To illustrate Verb problem
to make
this
point, when famer
give up their farming work, it Correct your spelling
farmer
farmers
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
decreasing
number of agricultural output. Correct article usage
a decreasing
For instance
, due to
lack
of agricultural human resources to Correct article usage
a lack
grows
rice and fruit trees, all people living in Wrong verb form
grow
country
must Add an article
the country
strucggle
lack of food situation. Correct your spelling
struggle
As a result
, moving out of countryside
will Correct article usage
the countryside
do
harmful community's Verb problem
be
lifes
quality.
Correct your spelling
life
Besides
that, the one of advantage
brought to Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
rural's
lives is that they may access many useful Change noun form
rural
knowledges
. To explain, because cities where contain universities and Fix the agreement mistake
knowledge
insititutes
, which is a great Correct your spelling
institutes
places
to study. Change the noun form
place
For example
, they can study more new agricultural technologys
,which Correct your spelling
technologies
technology
Add a missing verb
are relly
relly
harmful to their career.
In conclusion, the leaving Correct your spelling
really
countryside
to move to downtown tendency seem an undesired progress is
conducive to adverse impact on society, human health, and life quality. In my opinion , Correct pronoun usage
that is
this
tendency has a nagative
effect.Correct your spelling
negative
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