In many countries adound the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you tink this positive or negative development. Give reason for your answer and niclude any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowasday

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Nowadays

, there are many people who live in

countryside

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the countryside

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to move to downtown leads to it decreasing

number of

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apply

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pupulation

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population

in the

countryside

. I personally

believed

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that

this

trend is totally harmful. One quite serious problem that can arise from leaving the

countryside

to move in cities is that it somehow causes air

popllution

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pollution

problem

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problems

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.

In particular

,

due to

dwellers

more

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being more

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and more are raised,

this

tendency may create

greenhouse

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a greenhouse

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effect, which is related to human

heath

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health

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. As a case in point, there are many

healthy

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health

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problems

are

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created

with

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by

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air pollution

such

as tubercrulosis and bronchitis which lead to seriously

reduce

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human health for a long time .

Therefore

, moving out

countryside

may create some problems which cause many people's

lifes

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lives

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. Another issue which should be not overlooked is that moving

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to

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downtown uncontrollably, which is more likely

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makes

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food imbalanced situation. To illustrate

this

point, when

famer

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farmer

farmers

give up their farming work, it

lead

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leads

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to

decreasing

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a decreasing

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number of agricultural output.

For instance

,

due to

lack

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a lack

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of agricultural human resources to

grows

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grow

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rice and fruit trees, all people living in

country

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the country

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must

strucggle

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struggle

lack of food situation.

As a result

, moving out of

countryside

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the countryside

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will

do

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be

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harmful community's

lifes

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life

quality.

Besides

that, the one of

advantage

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advantages

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brought to

rural's

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rural

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lives is that they may access many useful

knowledges

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knowledge

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. To explain, because cities where contain universities and

insititutes

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institutes

, which is a great

places

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place

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to study.

For example

, they can study more new agricultural

technologys

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technologies

technology

,which

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are relly

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relly

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really

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harmful to their career. In conclusion, the leaving

countryside

to move to downtown tendency seem an undesired progress

is

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that is

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conducive to adverse impact on society, human health, and life quality. In my opinion ,

this

tendency has a

nagative

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negative

effect.