sOME PEOPLE BEILEVE keeping animals as a pet is good thing for children others think it is advantageous and unhealthy which option do you agree.

Few people

concern

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are concerned

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that keeping fauna

in

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at

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home is

benefical

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beneficial

for

the

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apply

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children because having a carnivore can enhance a child's social skills and aid them

developing

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in developing

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confidence

while

,

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others opine that there are some disadvantages and health risks associated with staying savage. I agree that kids may

improved

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improve

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their creativity by the animals but causing allergy is another issue. keeping animals in the house can improve legitimate confidence

as well as

a

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apply

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social skills in the environment. To commence with,

this

can be seen that

although

pet

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pets

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can

cause

allergy

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allergies

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and harmful

disease

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diseases

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to

the

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apply

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juvenile

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juveniles

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, learning different

activity

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activities

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such

as

,

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apply

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racing with them,

enhancing

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and enhancing

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empathy

level

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levels

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that would be continuously upgraded

by

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over

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time

period

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periods

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.

in addition

, they feel frequently

relax

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relaxed

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when they spend time with their animal.

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, In the

united

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United

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kingdome

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Kingdom

, most of the masses enjoy time with their pet so they become delighted in every situation either awful condition or happy situation.

Hence

,

becoming

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apply

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improvement in

the

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apply

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social skills

as well as

confidence levels

are play

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play

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a vital role in the

kids

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kid's

kids'

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life

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lives

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.

However

,

Even-though

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even though

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pets

give

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have

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some

benefit

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beneficial

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impact

to

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on

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the offspring , they

cause

worse

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a worse

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impact

not

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on not

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only

skin

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the skin

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but

also

respiratory

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the respiratory

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tract system.

To begin

with, when younger contact with their domestic animal and their hair can

leads

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lead

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to

the

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apply

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hazardous

side-effects

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side effects

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to them

as a result

they face a lot of harmful

disease

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diseases

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like

,

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apply

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aczema

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eczema

, itching ,and asthma problems.

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, In India, preschool children touch their skin continuously after that they do not wash their

hand

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hands

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which can

cause

hazards

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hazardous

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problems

to

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for

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them.

Moreover

, It might be said that, if children were

touch

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in touch

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with their

animal

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animals

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,

immunity

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their immunity

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system would be

effect

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affected

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which can

cause

infection

to

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apply

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them

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apply

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.

To sum up

,

Although

, keeping animal in their home can give

marvolus

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marvellous

advantages to them, it

have

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has

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some negative impacts on the body. so,

i

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I

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believe that

the

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apply

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pets

has

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have

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more fruitful benefit than

demarits

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demerits

.