▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000.

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart illustrates the proportion of the
budget
which was dedicated by the UAE government to each segment in 2000. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is apparent that investment in "Social Security" and "Health" were ranked first and second and accounted for around half of the total
budget
. With regard to the proportion of absorbed
budget
by main groups,
in addition
to the two mentioned categories with 100 and 53
billion
AED, the amount of money spent on "Education" affairs took
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third place with 38
billion
AED.
Moreover
, both investment segments entitled "Debt interest" and "Other expenditure" received 23
billion
AED the amount of money which is one
billion
more than the
budget
dedicated to "Defence" purposes. In terms of the categories that were given less priority of
budget
dedication, "Law and order" absorbed 17
billion
AED which is almost one-fifth of that of "Social Security" as the first rank. Other
budget
items including "Industry" and "Transportation" can be considered as the lowest ranks with 13 and 9
billion
AED.
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