▪️The chart below shows how much money is spent in the budget on different sectors by the UAE government in 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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pie chart illustrates the proportion of the

budget

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which was dedicated by the UAE government to each segment in 2000. Looking at the

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perspective, it is apparent that investment in "Social Security" and "Health" were ranked first and second and accounted for around half of the total

budget

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. With regard to the proportion of absorbed

budget

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by main groups,

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to the two mentioned categories with 100 and 53

billion

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AED, the amount of money spent on "Education" affairs took

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third place with 38

billion

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AED.

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, both investment segments entitled "Debt interest" and "Other expenditure" received 23

billion

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AED the amount of money which is one

billion

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more than the

budget

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dedicated to "Defence" purposes. In terms of the categories that were given less priority of

budget

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dedication, "Law and order" absorbed 17

billion

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AED which is almost one-fifth of that of "Social Security" as the first rank. Other

budget

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items including "Industry" and "Transportation" can be considered as the lowest ranks with 13 and 9

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AED.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, billion with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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