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People's shopping habit depends more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the purchasing pattern of an individual relies more on his or her stage of life than on other aspects. I am not totally convinced that
age
 could be an important factor that impacts people's buying style. Perhaps, it depends on the economic class
as well as
 the mentality of consumers.
To begin
 with, many companies target to acquire their customers by dividing them into financial tiers rather than
age
 groups.
This
 strategy is often successful because consumerism is mainly associated with the power of purchase of society.
On the other hand
, focusing on
age
 brackets, to sell the product, might not fulfil the sales figures because of the many dependencies of youngsters and older generations on adults.
Therefore
, shopping practices can not depend heavily upon
age
 classifications. Leading car manufacturers like Tata, Hyundai and Suzuki,
for instance
, are mainly concentrating on economic segments of the communities to increase their revenues from basic
as well as
 luxury vehicles. Not only the class of people but
also
 the attitude of a particular person heavily influences the style of buying something. Nowadays,
due to
 the advancement in technology, many leading organisations are fetching the behavioural patterns of humans through their social media interactions, and calculating their shopping routines. On account of the above research, related individuals are getting advertisements
according to
 their personalities.
Apart from
this
, there are three types of tendencies related to shopping habits in humans- shopaholic, semi-shopaholic and normal.
For example
, one of my friends is a shopping addict person and she has many unnecessary things at home.
To conclude
,
although
age
 could be one of the factors effective on anyone's purchase style, it can not be the decisive one.
However
, other aspects like the buying capacity or perspective towards consumerism of mankind are more considerable.
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