The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons whererelevant.Write at least 150 words.
#percentage #households #kinds #technology #information #themain #features #comparisons #whererelevant
The line graph illustrates data about different technologies,
such
as satelite
, cable, internet, and broadcast, that Correct your spelling
satellite
used
to Add a missing verb
were used
watching
television in one US city from 2004 to 2014.
Wrong verb form
watch
Overall
, while
cable and satelite
technologies were major Correct your spelling
satellite
trend
for watching television Change the noun form
trends
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
, this
trend replaced
by the internet in 2010. Meanwhile, Add a missing verb
was replaced
satelite
technology shows Correct your spelling
satellite
stable
trend.
In 2004, Broadcasting was the main technology that nearly Add an article
the stable
a stable
90.000
households used for watching TV. After that, it showed Correct your spelling
90,000
steady
downward trajectory and reached almost 5.000 households in 2014. Correct article usage
a steady
People
used to
cable technology Change preposition
apply
same
as broadcasting Correct article usage
the same
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
but after 2005, it reached to
almost 120.00 Change preposition
apply
people
and showed constant
decrease to nearly 50.000 Add an article
a constant
people
at the end
of the period
.
At the beginning of the period
nearly hundreds of people
was
using Change the verb form
were
internet
Add an article
the internet
for watching
TV but it Change preposition
to watch
expreinced
Correct your spelling
experienced
Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
rise throughout the Change the word
sharp
period
and reached to the
highest point with 190.000 households in 2014.Correct article usage
apply
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