The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the value of
sales
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of popular baked goods in an individual bakery in 2014.
Overall
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, bread and
buns
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appear to have been more profitable than pies but the
sales
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of
buns
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ended the period in steep decline, ending up even below pie
sales
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. In
January
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,
sales
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of bread were valued at $80,000 but
this
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figure fell to around $45,000 in March and fluctuated between $40,000 and $65,000 until September. The
last
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quarter,
however
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, saw a jump in the value of bread
sales
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to finish where it was at the beginning of the year. The
sales
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of
buns
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followed quite a different pattern. In
January
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, bun
sales
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stood at $40,000 but quickly rose to $70,000 in May and remained stable until August, after which they plunged to just $30,000 in December. The value of pies sold slowly increased from $10,000 in
January
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to
reach
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$20,000 in August.
Sales
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then
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levelled off but went up sharply in the
last
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two months of the year to close just ahead of
buns
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at $40,000. Pies were the only item where
sales
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figures in December exceeded those in
January
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, buns, january with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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