The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features, and make comparisons whererelevant.Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates different types of technology used for watching television in one US city from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
, the usage of internet
to watch television has dramatically increased throughout the time period Correct article usage
the internet
while
,
cables and broadcast usage have declined gradually.
In 2004, Remove the comma
apply
number
of households which used Change the article
a number
the number
Add an article
the internet
internet
to get signals for their Capitalize word
Internet
tv
was nearly Correct your spelling
TV
10000
. Correct your spelling
10,000
Then
that has raised up to almost 200000 during next decade. Furthermore
, people who used satellite signals to watch television were
improved by 40000 throughout the ten years.
Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the substantial usage reduction was shown by broadcast technology which was above 80000 to around 20000. Additionally
, the amount
of households who used cables to get signals showed approximately 40000 Change the quantifier
number
reduction
with some fluctuations during 10 years.Change to a plural noun
reductions
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