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More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in cities. What problems can this cause? How can these problems be solved?

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It is
beeing
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being
withnessed
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noted
 that rural-urban migration is happening with an increasing trend, and
this
phenominon
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phenomenon
 has brought about
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numbers
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 of issues,
such
 as
overgrowing
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 of inflation levels in housing prices and
uprising
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 trend of traffic
conjection
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consumption
.
However
, these problems could be resolved easily if some proper actions are taken.
Initially
, there has been an astronomical rise in accommodation prices in recent years following the increase in
demands
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 for
puchasing
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purchasing
 or renting houses and
appartments
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apartments
. The reason is that construction sites are not able to build new projects in proportion to the number of people coming to megacities each year; So it is straightforward to see that accommodation costs go even higher as
this
 trend is going to continue.
In addition
 to that, traffic
conjestion
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congestion
 is another reason to be worried about the growing population of urban areas. There are more petrol-driven vehicles in the streets than ever before which has
eventuated
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 in turning cities
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 a big source of air pollution these days.
Goverments
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Governments
Government
 and local authorities are mostly responsible for these negative effects of rural-urban migration. They can simply adopt some plausible approaches to prevent the immigration of
rural
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 populace to the metropolises, as the most important underlying cause of
above-mentioned
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 problems.
For example
, job opportunities in remote towns should be enhanced in order to make it possible for recently graduated students to land a decent job in their own province.
Besides
, if more people are persuaded to stay in their hometown the traffic
conjestion
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congestion
 in cities will be automatically reduced as
the
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fewer individuals will be commuting in the overpopulated cities. With
ragard
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regard
regards
 to
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the everincreaing
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everincreaing
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ever increasing
 living costs of city life caused by the high demand for houses, officials should encourage new
constructing
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 projects,
specially
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 in
outskirts
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the outskirts
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, by funding them.
This
 can tremendously help the prices to decline to a logical amount in a short
peiod
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period
 of time. In conclusion,
although
 it seems to be hard to deal with
this
 matter at
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first glance,
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if immediate actions are taken to discourage people from choosing megacities for living, there will be no more issues caused by rural-urban migration.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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