The Line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The given line chart illustrates how many
patients
were visited in a week on average in the four clinics between 2010 and 2016.
At the outset, the three sectors (birth control, eye, diabetic) increased the number of patients
in starting but only one sector (dental) decreased its patients
. Moreover
, these numbers fluctuated in next
six years.
In 2010, birth control was the dominant sector which people visited the most but in the end, they finished at the second most going department around 240 Correct article usage
the next
patients
in period
of 2010. Add an article
a period
the period
In contrast
, eye clinic
started to rise from the beginning and surpassed Fix the agreement mistake
clinics
the
birth control around 2013 with 200 plus Correct article usage
apply
patients
and come
to an end Wrong verb form
came
around
350 Change preposition
with around
patients
in 2016.
The remaining two sectors formed opposite pattern
from each other. Dental was the only sector which started to decline from the beginning and Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
then
continued to increase and crossed the diabatic in 2013. This
figure then
remained stable approximately. On the other hand
, diabetic
rose from the initial stage and Replace the word
diabetes
then
levelled off over a period of two years then
grew in Correct article usage
an upwards
upwards
direction sharply and stopped at 180 Replace the word
upward
patients
in 2016.Submitted by ahmadarch007 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words patients with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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