The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of maximum levels of

water

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in the

water

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repository of six distinct

cities

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in Australia between

October

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2009 and the same month in 2010.

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, in all

cities

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, the

water

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volume in

October

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2010 was more than in

October

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2009 except in Darwin and Brisbane City, where

water

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levels in cisterns were less than in

October

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2009 and the same in both years, respectively. In

October

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2009, Canberra and Sydney accounted for the highest amount of

water

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levels at roughly 75 per cent for both

cities

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and

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it rose to approximately 80 and 100 per cent, respectively.

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, the

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amount in Melbourne and Perth, at almost 25 and 40%, was less than in other towns in 2009. Afterwards, both

cities

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experienced moderate growth of around 10 and 20% in

October

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2010.

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water

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quantity in Darwin declined from around 45% to just below 30% during the period,

while

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it remained constant in Brisbane municipality.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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3 paragraphs

163 words

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The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

Some People prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In Some Countries,More and more people are becoming interested in finding out abut the history of the house or building they live in what are the reasons for this? How can people research this?