The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of maximum levels of
water
in the
water
repository of six distinct
cities
in Australia between
October
2009 and the same month in 2010.
Overall
, in all
cities
, the
water
volume in
October
2010 was more than in
October
2009 except in Darwin and Brisbane City, where
water
levels in cisterns were less than in
October
2009 and the same in both years, respectively. In
October
2009, Canberra and Sydney accounted for the highest amount of
water
levels at roughly 75 per cent for both
cities
and
then
it rose to approximately 80 and 100 per cent, respectively.
Likewise
, the
water
amount in Melbourne and Perth, at almost 25 and 40%, was less than in other towns in 2009. Afterwards, both
cities
experienced moderate growth of around 10 and 20% in
October
2010.
In contrast
,
water
quantity in Darwin declined from around 45% to just below 30% during the period,
while
it remained constant in Brisbane municipality.
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