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This graph shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

This graph shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
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shift
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a shift
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 in food eating habits by Chinese people in
period
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a period
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of
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 1985 and 2010. In 25 years the amount of used salt in food has dropped significantly,
nevertheless
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 Chinese citizens have started to consume more meat and
fish
. The quantity of
fish
 consumed fluctuated wildly beginning from 1985 to 1995, but the trend was upward and it
also
stays
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 in
first
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 position. At the start point of
graph
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 Chinese
citizen
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citizens
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 eat 600
grams
 of
fish
 in 1 week, after 5 years
consumption
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the consumption
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 level had gained to 700
grams
 and in half a decade
it
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comeback
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 to the initial point.
Afterward
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 from the mid of 1990s
fish
 ingestion rose gradually in 15 years to 850
grams
.  Starting from 1985
amount
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the amount
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 of meat
consume
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consumed
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 rose gradually from 100
grams
for
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per
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person
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a person
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 in one week to 200
grams
,
nevertheless
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nevertheless,
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 salt intake in the same period of time declined dramatically from 480
grams
 to 200
grams
 for 1 person in 1 week.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "nevertheless".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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