This graph shows how the population change from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties of U.S Columbia, Yamhill and Washington ,so lets write about this graph.

This graph shows how the population change from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties of U.S Columbia, Yamhill and Washington ,so lets write about this graph.
This
graph shows how the
population
change from 1940 to 2000 in three different counties of
U.S
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U.S.
Columbia
,
Yamhill
and
Washington
,so
lets
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write about
this
graph. At
start
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of
1940
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1940,
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the
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Columbia
had the lowest quantity of people compared
of
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others
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regions of America , 25,000 . at
this
time
the
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Yamhill
had
a
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30,000 and
Washington
had 75,000. in 1970
Columbias
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population
rised
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rose
raised
rise
to 36.000
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that
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the Columbias
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Columbias
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population
increased to 50
percents
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! At the time
Yamhills
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Yamhill's
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population
became
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increased
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from 30.000 to 45.000 .
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that
Yamhills
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Yamhill's
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population
increased to 50% like
a
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Columbia
.
by
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the way
Washington
make
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a
biggest
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step than
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Columbia
and
Yamhill
, from 75.000 to 125.000 from 1970 to 2000 the graph show us that the
population
of
Columbia
and
Yamhill
goes
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approximately the same amounts that they had increased by the thirty years before.
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the years from the years
Washingtom
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Washington
had always
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population
from
Columbia
and
Yamhill
.
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1940 to 1970 the
population
of
Washington
rose gradually . and between 1970 to 2000 the rose climbed sharply. the
population
growth of
Columbia
and
Yamhill
always
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has always
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been almost the same. any way.
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