Few nations take interest in local transport to give them first priority which means they do not prefer
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vehicle
transportation
. In my opinion, it is beneficial and my justification will come in
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also
I will discuss both points of
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and give some relative examples.
To commence with, there are several reasons why some countries promote public transport
instead
of personal
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.
Firstly
, there are increasing number of vehicles which create
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of pollution in
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and people find traffic
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in many places.
For instance
,
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number of personal vehicles are not suitable for any emergency situation
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time
individuals find traffic problems
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can be
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of their lots of
time
.
Secondly
, poor citizens can not afford their own
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therefore
they rely on public
transportation
.
Thirdly
, the majority of
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late and
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their workplace or students
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not prefer
this
kind of environment.
Furthermore
, the government want to increase their source of money from taxes, toll tax
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emergency used equipment and accident insurance.
Moreover
, public
transportation
not only
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of accident
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but
also
increase
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.
On the other hand
,
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promoting public transport there are some disadvantages there of
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. All human beings
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,
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and
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individuals
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find their comfort zone and they need to wait longer
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and
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places in trains.
In addition
, native people
and
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their personal
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for their
time
management,
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and whenever they need at that timethey use their personal
vehicle
.
To recapitulate, the
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should encourage people to
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public
transportation
but they
also
need to follow
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of public
transportation
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and many more. Eventually, they should
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data
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personal
vehicle
use.