Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Few nations take interest in local transport to give them first priority which means they do not prefer

own

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their own

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vehicle

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transportation

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. In my opinion, it is beneficial and my justification will come in

next

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the next

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paragraphas

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paragraphs

paragraph

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also

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I will discuss both points of

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and give some relative examples. To commence with, there are several reasons why some countries promote public transport

instead

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of personal

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vehicle

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vehicles

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.

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, there are increasing number of vehicles which create

lost

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lots

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of pollution in

environment

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the environment

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and people find traffic

jam

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jams

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in many places.

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,

growing

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number of personal vehicles are not suitable for any emergency situation

that

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apply

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time

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individuals find traffic problems

which

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apply

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can be

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a wast

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wast

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waste

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of their lots of

time

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.

Secondly

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, poor citizens can not afford their own

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vehicle

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vehicles

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therefore

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they rely on public

transportation

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.

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, the majority of

public

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the public

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getting

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arrive

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late and

reached

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reach

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their workplace or students

are

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do

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not prefer

this

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kind of environment.

Furthermore

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, the government want to increase their source of money from taxes, toll tax

and

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emergency used equipment and accident insurance.

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, public

transportation

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not only

cutdown

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cut down

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number

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the number

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of accident

happen

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that happen

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but

also

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increase

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the ecomony

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ecomony

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economy

.

On the other hand

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,

by

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apply

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promoting public transport there are some disadvantages there of

local

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the local

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poublic

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public

. All human beings

used

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use

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bus

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buses

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,

coach

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coaches

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and

train

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trains

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then

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apply

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individuals

not

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do not

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find their comfort zone and they need to wait longer

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time

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times

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and

crowded

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in crowded

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places in trains.

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, native people

moveing forwad

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moving forward

and

buy

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buying

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their personal

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vehicle

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vehicles

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for their

time

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management,

efficiency

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and efficiency

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and whenever they need at that timethey use their personal

vehicle

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. To recapitulate, the

administrative

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administration

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should encourage people to

used

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use

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public

transportation

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but they

also

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need to follow

rules

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the rules

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of public

transportation

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time table

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timetable

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and many more. Eventually, they should

analyzing

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analyse

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data

of

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on

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personal

vehicle

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use.