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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some individuals argue that nowadays publicizing is an overwhelming tool
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 introducing
products
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 and attracting
people
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’s attention to buy them,
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 others believe that advertising does not have the capability of convincing
people
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 to purchase the advertised things anymore. From my perspective both these views are justifiable
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 essay I will explain them. In terms of supporters of
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 idea, as advertising is the fastest and the most overwhelming way of introducing
products
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 worldwide, international companies all over the world allocate huge
amount
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amounts
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 of
fund
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funds
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 to advertise their
products
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.
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,
iPhone
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the iPhone
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 Company starts advertising even before launching new commodities,
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consequently
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attract
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 international customers and profit dramatically.
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,
this
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 approach provides the opportunity for users to get acquainted with new goods.
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, not only acquainting
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 with new commodities would be impossible, but
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population
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the population
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 all over the world would be deprived of new technologies.
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, many individuals not only do not pay attention to various ads, but
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 they consider them as
trickster
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tricksters
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due to
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 some adverse experiences of relying on advertisements. To illustrate
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, we can see that nowadays many
people
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 are
sacrificed
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scared
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 of swindlers, who advertise and
sale
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 fake
products
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.
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, in these
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cases,
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 pessimism toward of kinds of ads would be inevitable.
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,
people
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 should have some valid sources to check advertisements and
do
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make
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 their purchases. In conclusion, I think advertising is the most efficient way to introduce various
products
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,
consequently
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surge
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increasing
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 the customers and profit.
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, to prevent being deceived, the users should investigate
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the trustworthiness of ads before shopping.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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