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the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
#tourists #caribbean #island
The line chart
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illustrating
illutrations
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illustrates
 the
number
 of
people
 who
visits
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visited
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island
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islands
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 and
cruise
ships
 between 2010 and 2017
Overall
, the
people
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number of people
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 who
travels
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travel
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 on
island
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the island
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was risen
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rose
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 between 2012 and 2019
while
 higher than
cruise
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on cruise
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ships
 in 2016.
On the other hand
, the
number
 of
people
 staying on
cruise
ships
was remained
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remained
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 between 2013 and 2015.
However
, since 2010, the
number
 of
tourists
was
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has
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significant
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significantly
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 increased. In 2012, the
number
od
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of
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tourists
 who
staying
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stayed
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 on
island
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the island
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 was 0.25
millions
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million
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, compared to 1.25
millions
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million
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 who
chouse
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chose
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staying
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to stay
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 on
cruise
ships
 so there was
substantial
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a substantial
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different
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difference
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 in
number
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numbers
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 at
this
 time. By 2015, the figure had
stable
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a stable
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 increase on
islandm
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the islandm
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 after
next
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the next
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yearm
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year
years
 the
number
 of
people
 who
visits
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visited
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island
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the island
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 was more than
cruise
ships
 around 1.5
millions
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million
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tourists
. Since 2013, the
number
 of
tourists
had
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has
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 not changed as much on
cruise
 chips
umtil
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until
 2015. After
next
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the next
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 year,
people
choused
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chose
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 that
was
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apply
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decreased
around
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to around
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 1.25
millions
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million
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.
Although
 peoples choused
curise
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cruise
ships
 was not increased
but
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apply
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the
number
 of total
tourists
 was stable rose
until
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steadily until
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 the end of the data.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, island, cruise, ships, tourists, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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