Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some
people
have various views about limiting
make
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and making
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a
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apply
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some
noise
. The other part of them think we should make a
noise
when we want.
Also
, if we don'
t
agitate with
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loud
sound
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to others, we will can it. I strongly ally with
this
idea that
community
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the community
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should
can
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let out when they want. I will elaborate more on
this
point throughout
this
essay. First of all, Why don'
t
like
people
loud
sound
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sounds
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or something? Because overmuch
aloud
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loud
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noises
damages
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people
's eardrum,
as a
result
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result,
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they may be deaf.
Secondly
, always persons have
hectic
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a hectic
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lifestyle and they absolutely prefer more
quite
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quiet
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or reassuring
musics
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music
kinds of music
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than
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to
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noise
.
For instance
, students, they are
be
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being
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occupied with exercises and preparing for exams every day.
However
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at the same time, their neighbours sing karaoke
loud
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in loud
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voice
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voices
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,
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and
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as a
consequence
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consequence,
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they can'
t
do
homeworks
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homework
. Because awful noises
bothers
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bother
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to
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apply
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their
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them
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. Maybe
that is
why,
people
think
should
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there should
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be some stringent control
about
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on
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noise
.
On the other hand
, sometimes
make
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making
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a
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apply
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some
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apply
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noise
can
be help
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help
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de-stress and it is again one way of rest. If you are abject and
despondency
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despondent
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, energy sound or
inspire
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inspiring
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dance
musics
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music
kinds of music
pieces of music
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will
may
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apply
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be happy
you
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for you
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. They are just
simple
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a simple
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way
be
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to be
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pleasant.
In addition
, you may de-stress and chill out by visiting different gratifying shows and
consert
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concerts
or somewhere again. By
this
manner
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manner,
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you literally cast stress off.
Besides
, in
this
day and
age
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age,
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people
are cracking down on
resist
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resisting
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different noises in all things.
As a result
impermeable to voice walls, doors and windows is created by scientists. They are the most effective way to block
noise
.
For example
, your house is completely filled with sound-proofing equipment, which helps you enjoy pleasant peace
while
you work or sleep. You will not hear any unpleasant and annoying sounds. In conclusion, most
people
like fun and excitement, and they tend to make
noise
. But that doesn'
t
mean they can make
noise
whenever they want. I mean they can make
noise
without disturbing others.
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