Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
have various views about limiting make
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and making
a
some Remove the article
apply
noise
. The other part of them think we should make a noise
when we want. Also
, if we don't
agitate with annoyed
loud Replace the word
annoying
sound
to others, we will can it. I strongly ally with Fix the agreement mistake
sounds
this
idea that community
should Correct article usage
the community
can
let out when they want. I will elaborate more on Verb problem
be
this
point throughout this
essay.
First of all, Why don't
like people
loud sound
or something? Because overmuch Fix the agreement mistake
sounds
aloud
noises Correct your spelling
loud
damages
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damage
people
's eardrum, as a
result
they may be deaf. Add the comma(s)
result,
Secondly
, always persons have hectic
lifestyle and they absolutely prefer more Add an article
a hectic
quite
or reassuring Correct your spelling
quiet
musics
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music
kinds of music
pieces of music
than
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to
noise
. For instance
, students, they are be
occupied with exercises and preparing for exams every day. Change the form of the verb
being
However
at the same time, their neighbours sing karaoke Add a comma
However,
loud
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in loud
voice
,Fix the agreement mistake
voices
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and
as a
consequence
they can'Add a comma
consequence,
t
do homeworks
. Because awful noises Correct your spelling
homework
bothers
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bother
to
Change preposition
apply
their
. Maybe Change the pronoun
them
that is
why, people
think should
be some stringent control Correct pronoun usage
there should
about
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on
noise
.
On the other hand
, sometimes make
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making
a
Remove the article
apply
some
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apply
noise
can be help
de-stress and it is again one way of rest. If you are abject and Change the verb form
help
despondency
, energy sound or Replace the word
despondent
inspire
dance Wrong verb form
inspiring
musics
will Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
may
be happy Remove a modal verb
apply
you
. They are just Change preposition
for you
simple
way Correct article usage
a simple
be
pleasant. Fix the infinitive
to be
In addition
, you may de-stress and chill out by visiting different gratifying shows and consert
or somewhere again. By Correct your spelling
concerts
this
manner
you literally cast stress off. Add a comma
manner,
Besides
, in this
day and age
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age,
people
are cracking down on resist
different noises in all things. Wrong verb form
resisting
As a result
impermeable to voice walls, doors and windows is created by scientists. They are the most effective way to block noise
. For example
, your house is completely filled with sound-proofing equipment, which helps you enjoy pleasant peace while
you work or sleep. You will not hear any unpleasant and annoying sounds.
In conclusion, most people
like fun and excitement, and they tend to make noise
. But that doesn't
mean they can make noise
whenever they want. I mean they can make noise
without disturbing others.Submitted by muxlisa0505m on
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